Little Bird Music Video Second Draft

After the feedback we received from our peer assessment of our first draft, we went ahead with creating a second draft in the hope of eliminating the problems we had in the first draft. One of the main comments we received in what we could have improved on is the performance of James in the long shot of himself walking and lip singing - his lip singing was not prominent enough and the audience could not see what part of the lyrics he was singing as it was not clear enough. So, we have re-shot this part of the scene in the suburban area, as well as add a completely new location too.